No | Date | Name and Affiliation | Comment |
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1 | 27-10-2022 | Khanindra Pathak, IIT Kharagpur, India | Inline/In-text comments |
2 | 22-11-2022 |
Stig-Morten Knutsen, Norwegian Petroleum Directorate |
Thank you for the opportunity to comment on the above-mentioned document. Attached please find the document / file with comments in the text. • The draft is a good and comprehensive piece of work! |
3 | 18-11-2022 | Suya Wang, Independent, Japan | Requirements 8. Circularity or for all UNRMS whether can add one sentence: When plan to make product first thinking use can melting into nature’s resources to make it, then when this product life cycle finished, throw waste into nature, depending how long they can merge into the nature. This is true sustainability, can solve waste management issues. Ending throwing waste to landfills in an unsustainable way is important. Ocean is not an unlimited space. If we continue this way, one day we will lose our oceans. |
4 | 28-11-2022 | CIRISCO | Comments |
5 | 21-11-2022 | Min-Ha LE, Korea Institute of Industrial Technology, USA |
Page 10, section3, Princple3; the example of resource sectors is mentioned as energy, agriculture, trade, but if you imply separately mineral resources such as CRMs in sectors, it is much better. Page12, section8, Principle8; Circularity is also very important terms in RMS, but the critical issue is the lack of international standardization of circular system by dependent of product or CRMs. It needs to be focused on how connect this circularity to industrial standardization, i.e, IOS, for circular RMS. Page15, section B. Requirements, term3; building integrated management system is very important to handle crossover sectors. Probably it connects with the Annex II UNRMS tool kit concept in page20. Using blockchain and AI to analyze supply chain of resource and impact of resource to others, i.e, human society is urgent issue. For example, Clean energy index (similar to Resource Anxiety index) in term1 is good approach. But I can't find consideration or methodology on link between each index from each RMS of sectors, such as multiple sectors simultaneously analysis RMS using by big data. The energy, agriculture, CRMs are strongly correlated with change of economy and political situation of the world. Finally, UNECE is included Economy in the name on it. And I think that finding helpful solution for industry to benefit humans from international political, environmental and geopolitical resource issues is one of your goals. |
6 | 30-11-2022 | David Elliott, Independent, Canada | General and Inline/In-text Comments |
7 | 30-11-2022 | Jeff Geipel, Engineers Without Borders Canada |
We at the Mining Shared Value initiative of Engineers Without Borders Canada are grateful for the opportunity to provide feedback on the Draft UNRMS Principles and Requirements. Attached is our submission which focuses on the need to adjust the language of "value addition" to "local content" for clarity's sake, and some suggestions to strengthen the transparency components of the principles. Overall this is a well put together set of principles and requirements that will be highly useful in guiding policy and company practice. Thank you again for the opportunity to provide comments. |
8 | 30-11-2022 | Mohammad Albeldawi, Ministry of Environment and Climate Change, Qatar | Comments |
9 | 30-11-2022 | Simon Strickland, International Economic Unit, Cabinet Secretariat, United Kingdom |
In the draft paper, Section III(B) para (6) sub-para (a) refers to by- and co-product management, and in the same Section para (11) sub-para (c) refers to data quality. Is the UNRMS able to bring these two issues together in such a way as to help improve the quality of data on by- and co-products? |
10 | 28-11-2022 | Radoslav Vukas, Independent, Serbia | Comments |
11 | 22-11-2022 | SPE Oil and Gas Reserves Committee | Comments |
12 | 30-11-2022 | Xavier Troussaut and Bernard Seiller, Independent |
The document is very exhaustive, maybe too much so. We would suggest a shorter version which would be more accessible and applicable by the stakeholders (and have a better chance to be read entirely). This could be an additional document issued at the same time as this one).
A few comments are included in the attached pdf. |